The children used CoLAR app to help them write descriptive paragraphs.
Here are the results:-
The bird has a hard pointy beak, tiny nostrils and furious big eyes. The beautiful bird noticed its prey wriggling on the ground like a snake. The worm senses the bird and tries to get away but the bird is too fast.
The Bird is as beautiful as a lovely colourful bright rainbow. It's beak is as pointy as spikes. The bird is eating a horrible, disgusting worm. The bird's feathers are as soft as a pillow. The birds pupils are so big, I have never seen such big pupils.
It moves beautifully towards its own prey. The bird grabbed the yummy wet slimy worm with its sharp beak. The maginificent bird lives in a rae country and also its ultra rare itself! It cannot fly like a Magpie but it is a very fast runner! It's eye sight is fabulous, it can see for a hundred miles.